Deep and Reaching Roots
As I start my post
I look for….
I reach out….
I give no opion
Of anything to say
I state my case
And everyone treats me like I’m gay
Maybe I should have had the cue
That Turning things around…
Takes deep and reaching roots
But from the first insult
I don’t know why,
Giving people the freedom to define
Only depresses me
I affirm my directions a million times a day
But not getting them to paper….
I affirm my Logic
I affirm my ways
But only a Percent make it to page
If you felt you understood a song
And wanted it to play
And hit the button
And the feeling went away
Hitting play was an affirmation to god
That you gave it your best today!
-Jeremy Sr.
I AM ADDING THIS : IF YOU WOULD LIKE FRIENDSHIP AND/OR POETRY CLICK MY NAME AND SEND ME A PRIVATE MESSAGE PLEASE TELL ME THE TYPE OF POEM YOU ARE LOOKING FOR (LOVE, INTELLIGENT, STORYS BOTH FANTASY AND LIFE'S) JUST GIVE ME SOME IDEA WHAT YOUR UP TOO.
Na na! -Jeremy Sr.
Admittedly I didn't like the poem. But I think its cool that you posted it here, why not? Its always cool when someone creates something and puts it into the world, though I'm not much of a fan of poetry in general personally.
the poem is really a collection of one and two part sentences that come from tens of other poems I have written. To me the real gift with this one is that the timing was smooth I rat a tat tat alot droning 600 poems. To make one good one you write 10 opinionated ones and finally you sum up a point, and you build a reporitwa of catch frazes. this one sucked because you don't know my metaphore on the tree of knowledge yet and the different types of fruit your harvesting. - Jeremy Sr.
Exactly what part of the above did you not understand? Apparently not only can you not spell you can't read either. Then you send me this dribble in PM?
"aksjd dskfj lsdj aksdjfjds fsdk lfasd fld fjal fas df lsd f to you! -jeremy Sr."
Again...DO...NOT...SEND...ME...PRIVATE...MESSAGES. Got it?
Lost souls
One day
I'm tired too -Jeremy Sr.
Don't come to the forums to fight show off watson. Jeremy Sr.
It's live guys , downloading now!
<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<catch frazes and thinking a good thought when all you see is negitive>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
Word Crafter,
If I write every word as the same element as the dictionary says is true
One by one and then think
What is my reaction
Stop there look opposite
From good to bad
From bad to good, that would be insane
But to stare straight at the problem
Is insane too
Not after looking opposite
And thinking a good thought
Make the future immenent
And most important to appease
You will leave seeds
Strings attach to the mind
Forget that, this or that
with affirmative be happy
you’re learning
what if you designated yourself to be word crafter of a tribe
that compares to have “My design”
Not as simple as that,
To make a dreamy title
And do all it takes to brings out all the elements in your head
What if you had to compete
What if you had just wanted a story
Will ther even be a walk-in clinic to ask
To ask the questions, even if they were boring
Even if they had seen these problems before
Woudl they be the Director of thoughts?
A pych alla gist or Path olagist
would be better still then any of the three
You may be!
For some reason I get flashes of Justin Bieber.
Who's songs are so bad they make me heave-a.
A poem is a bunch of words,
whether good, bad, or ugly
A poem is a pile of bricks,
that might not be a house,
A poem can make sense,
if but to the author
A poem is a song,
that needs but music
A poem is a waste of time,
if a very well written waste of time
Will somebody please remove this infant from the forums. I can't take much more of this shite...
I've been talked to at lenght I will refrain from posting Criminal (Questionable) political and mental stuff along with not posting poems off subject. -Jeremy Sr.
Back in 1996 I made the catch fraze "young cherubs build puzzles" and It changed my life -Jeremy
If anyone would request poems name your catagory or interest and i'll send them (non-questionable) ones to you. -Jeremy Sr
Unfortunately!
I figured I'd stop this thread from growing by removing the Questionable stuff and elaborate on word crafter a little I had planned to profess all the meanings that you couldn't see as a guru but I guess I look for somewhere else for stimulation. on the subject of the game thank you for letting me play test for you! design is all I have been doing since I thought up my first cd cover idea and wrote poetry. I have good game design ideas but they don't fit the forum what yours can do, which is stiill a quesiton I have. Will visual studio 2008 mod games and will there be a forum for that? -Jeremy Sr.
Let me get my popcorn
Am I the only one that thinks this stuff needs Pink Floyd music behind it?
Sure,this isnt a poetry site but think about it...
vStyler and I are both musicians...would you send us away if we posted some mp3's?
Some cultures respect,even revere the cazy.
OK, this is ludicrous. This is harassment and this joker should be reprimanded, imo. It's one thing to start a senseless thread. It entirely another thing to attack a senior member both publically and via PM. This is blatent abuse of the system and I for one think it should be ended.
We've had our fun, someone please show this clown the door....
Well...crazy posting is fine but harrasing our members isnt.
So yes,this guy needs some "guidance"from a mod.
Aw man...now I'm really feeling old! Wow...typing all those letters tired me out. Ok...time for my nap!
And it's ok guys...I didn't feel a thing. Now...if this guy shows up at my front door then we have a problem. For now I'll go with the 3 strikes rule.
Besides...when I read this crap I feel sane...well...a lot closer than this guy anyway!
Been there...done that.
For reasons I cannot fully divulge without angering the forum gremlins.
And by gremlins I mean the mods.
And by the mods I mean Jafo.
Play nice everyone.
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