Chapter 1: Intel
Crusader Cirene saw on her holo-display, a blinking light symbolizing the scryer's pick-up point. Crusader Cirene, waived her hand over a very peculiar crystal sphere. The sphere, in all its grandeur, flashed in a miniscule blue hue, and a beam of light came from the seeker vessel, bringing with it a tall, slender, exhausted, Scryer Neros into the ship's cargo hold.
The Vessel was the latest model in the Advent fleet. It was now considered overpowered from its predecessor, even by Advent standards. The engineering was a large part of it. The "Model 3" Seeker was made of Kalanite armor, with technology so advanced and confusing, the best scientists of the TEC, defiler worlds were unable to formulate any type of intelligence from one that they had captured, not two years ago. The reason being that the TEC defilers lacked any form of psionic, or psychic power. to even do the most menial of tasks. Without the presence of the Unity, all Advent ships were inoperable.
Cirene opened up the cargo hold's door, and Neros entered. He sat next to Cirene at the bridge, and gave her an order, "Take us to Thetis, Sanctity to be exact. I am sure that the Imperial Minister is going to want to hear this." Sanctity was the second oldest starbase, after Transcencia, so it was used as the orbital capital, and information center of the Unity. Again, Cirene waved her hand over the sphere, flashing red twice, then green, and the Seeker vessel entered phase space.
All was silent aboard the seeker. Cirene, eager to hear about the intelligence that Neros acquired on the desecrator world, broke the silence, and asked, "What information did you get from the traitor world?" Neros responded in a low tone, reflecting his exhaustion, "They're worried. They are fighting a 2-front battle, and they are outnumbered, and out-gunned." Cirene, unable to comprehend the information she just heard, asked another question, "Who else if fighting them?"
"Apparently, a nomadic, alien species, began to attack them only ten years before we did. They call themselves the 'Vasari', and the desecrators fear them. Not only that, but I was able to get some photos that they had on these things. They are about as tall as a normal person, have scaly, brown skin, their knees bend backwards, have yellow eyes, an elongated head, and are reptilian. The only thing is, that they are able to speak in human dialects. There is an implant in their brain, similar to the neural stimulators that we have, that is implanted on their speech cortex. The implant functions by using brainwaves as fuel. As brainwaves happen from normal cerebral functions, the implant takes them in, they are processed, the constituent energy from them is absorbed and used as fuel. The emissions or wastes from it, are several frequencies, both high and low, that are fed back into the brain. The result, they can speak, and understand any, and all languages."
"What else?" asked Cirene eagerly.
"The rest is information, that will be discussed at the informational meeting in the base with the War Minister. He has to hear this."
=======================Transcencia-class star base in orbit around Tethys========================
==Internal Intelligence Room==
A well-dressed woman with long, brilliant hair slowly walks up to the front of the room. She is known across the empire as being the 'Spokesperson for the Imperial Minister' and thusly, is respected by many, and all. She arrives at the podium bearing the Imperial mark, and spoke.
" I bid you welcome members of the Unity, as well as the Coalesced alike. I come to you today to provide you with information regarding ourselves, as well as the enemy. I begin our meeting today, with our present situation, at our homeworld. After the situation a little over a month ago, both the War Minister, and the Imperial Minister, have decided that we can no longer afford to take risks, associated with the cost of an invasion. They both have ordered the full construction of 20 more beam defense platforms, 3 Hangar Defense Stations, as well as the laying of several mines in the gravity well of the planet. They are also ordering the construction of 2 Radiance Battleships, 100 Illuminator Vessels, 20 Aeria Drone hosts, 50 Disciple vessels, and if at all possible, a Transcencia base."
A man, driven mad with anger, arose from the crowd, and voiced his opinion of the matter, " Now I understand that after having been attacked, the citizens of Alcmena would want to defend their world. I don't blame them, I would have the same reaction. I've kept quiet when you spoke of all of these defensive efforts the Ministry of War deems necessary for our own protection, but when you speak of the ultimate war machine, a Transcencia base being constructed around an otherwise peaceful planet, I don't see why that would need to be a necessary precaution."
The speaker, made her rebuttal, "I understand that you may seem reluctant, and that your sentiment reflects that of what it is that you are surrounded by in the Aerolian sector. But if you find that loosing 320,000 people, access to the Keiper system, which we will now have to fight for to regain control of, the destruction of another antimatter recharger in the empire, and the complete obliteration of the Consecrated Palace as something that can be overlooked, I, as a member of the Unity, would begin to question your devotion to our cause! Now if there are no further interruptions, I would like to move on, and discuss the battle front. We have been able to successfully capture 3 planets and have integrated them as part of the empire. Of those 3, one was a neutral world, that did question us at first. We resolved the problem by bringing in the Malevesant, for those of you who don't know, a Rapture Battlecruiser, and ordered all the adepts on board to do some mind-cleansing with the Domination ability that thy possess The other 2 were captured from the from the frontline against the traitors. We were able to root out all heretics, the ones that were able to stay, are of little use to us, besides crewing Disciple Vessels. Now that we are on the subject of des-"
"Millenia, hold on..." came from the entrance of the room. At that moment, Neros entered the room. He walked up to the speaker, whispered for a brief moment, handed her a small sphere, and proceeded with walking out of the room. She noted that there was a small paper that he also handed her that read, 'Display the contents of the sphere, I will tell you what to say telepathically from outside. Signed, Crus. Albert Palmira Neros ' Before continuing with the briefing, she began with establishing the mental connection that she would need to provide the information of the spheres contents. She began the connection, 'Neros, are you hearing me?' Not too long after, he responded, 'Yes, now you can begin.' She didn't hesitate one moment, she turned, loaded the sphere on a small, round pylon that was emitting a beam of light, and began again, " According to new information that was just provided to me today, we are apparently not alone in our assault of the TEC forefront. In the Li sector, the sector where the majority of the offenses are taking place."
The Li sector is one of the 26 divisions that the Advent recognize. When 1,000 years ago the Advent where exiled from their homeworld, the TEC came across their layout of the galaxy. They were so amazed at how organized and exact their map was, that they threw out their own, which contained about 600 divisions, and adopted the Advent's. There was only one key difference. The TEC renamed theirs, and kept absolutely no information about the Advent names, that could have prevented the loss of several worlds to the Advent.
"The Li sector, as you all are probably aware of, is the largest sector, outside of the Ganesh sector, where the Earth is located," she continued. "A new, previously unknown race has begun a full frontal assault, and as a result, are forcing the TEC to stretch their forces. This race has technology that is only somewhat superior to our own. Their technology revolves around the use of nanites, or extremely small and agile robots. On this first picture that I will show you, you will see their colony ship. It is needles to say, enormous. A transmission that was interrupted from them, we discovered that this was called a 'Jarrasul Evacuator'. Now I want you all to think for a moment, 'Evacuator', that means that they are running from something. If they are indeed running from something, why is it that they have stopped here, and began to attack the traitors? Whatever the reason maybe, we do know that this ship was able to easily take on a Kol Battleship, and defeat it, but not without any injuries of its own. Even though, it seemed as though it began to repair itself after the battle, as if to erase the scars of battle. On this second illustration, you will see the actual being that is the 'Vasari'. She displayed the photograph. This same being was captured, and is being detained at the sector 7-3 division, and is to be interrogated later today. They seem to be easy to manipulate mentally. But they also like to avoid the light. It should be noted that these creatures don't have the best intentions in mind as his peculiar one was a spy that was caught on the surface of Acheron earlier this week. It also seems to be clear that both the Vasari, and TEC are in the midst of designing and engineering a superweapon similar to our Deliverance engine, that allows us to cleanse the thoughts of a planet's heretic populace.
Suddenly, a reverberation was felt throughout the base. An alarm sounded, the warning lights came on, and the computer began to immediately inform those onboard of the situation. "Warning, Invaders detected. Warning, Invaders Detected. Now activating Self-Defense system." The alarmed speaker gave an order, "Computer, define invader identity, and calculate invader numbers immediately!" Shortly after, the computer system came on again, "Attackers Identified as the Trader Emergency Coalition, 3rd fleet. The fleet is comprised of 2 Kol Battleships, 30 Cobalt frigates, 3 Krosov frigates, and 10 Long Range Attackers. Attackers now within a kilometer of the base, activating, Disorientation Pulse."With that, a cloud of electromagnetic energy surged from the base as the attacking fleet headed towards it. Upon contact with the ships, their engines became disabled. Inside one of the Kols, the crew was stricken by surprise.
"Captain, the base has just fired an energy pulse that has overloaded the engine reactor feeds. Our ships are now just drifting towards the base!"
The captain of the ship responded, "I don't care what it takes, find a solution to get those reactors back online, and when you do, give the fleet the information! Someone tell me what it is that we are up ag-" At that exact moment, the ship felt a sudden push in the opposite direction, throwing all of its crew of of their seats, or on the floor if they were standing. The captain was the first to respond, "What the hell was that? Someone get me some answers fast before I start reprimanding you all!
" Captain, the ships computers have been able to confirm the energy signature of 24 Iconus Guardians.
"What the hell is that supposed to mean? Iconus Guardians are no war ship, they are support cruisers, fire upon them immediately!"
"Captain, Iconus Guardians are no war ship, but our previous intelligence tells us that Iconus Guardian crews, are the top Psychokinetic members of the Advent fleet. When our ships fell within range, their crew used the ships' abilities, and pushed us out of the way so that way we wouldn't be able to get in range to fire weapons!"
Inside the base, the speaker ordered that everyone stay calm, and evacuated the room. The starbase computer, now took over every single action in the base, while it began to do what it did best. "All weapon systems online, now commencing self-defense operations. All Drone Adepts, report to the command center in the upper pylon to begin offensive measures."
"Engines back online!" was the response from the systems administrator in the Kol.
"All other ships also reporting that their engines are back online." Came from the youngest of the crew, that managed inter-fleet operations.
"Then begin the assault as planned!" was the reply from the Captain. "Make sure that the base is the first thing we take out."
"Captain, massive phase out detected! Sensors indicate that there are 100+ ships. We can't take on a fleet of that size with our current fleet alone!"
"We can if they don't have the correct ships! Status report!"
"They have 6 Radiance Battleships, 4 Progenitor Motherships, 120 Illuminator Vessels, and 50 Disciple Vessels. We also detect a huge antimatter reaction from the starbase, and the Iconus Guardians.
With that, the Iconus Guardians gave off another round of Repulsion. The starbase the also began to fire. By this time all the Drone adepts had made it to the command center of the base, and launched the drones.
"Captain, the base has deployed bombers!"
"They really want to make sure that we don't get out of this place without taking damage. Michael, how long until the phase-out fleet arrives to the battle?"
"Sir, they are already within firing range, I also have more bad news, they have a Phase Inhibitor directly behind the base. Leaving is almost certainly not going to be an option."
"Damn it! If they are going to destroy us, why haven't hey attacked us yet?"
As if on cue, the fleet of 120 Illuminator vessels fired their beam weapons on the paralyzed fleet. On the first round 7 Cobalts fell out of formation, and exploded as their antimatter reactors reached critical mass. The bombers from the base had also joined in on the fighting, and took on one of the Kols, along with a Radiance battleship. On the unlucky Kol, a scene unfolded as the Radiance drew ever nearer,
"Captain Bolden, we are detecting an enormous antimatter reactor in that ship headed towards us. The energy projections have the reaction at 4.6 quadrillion Joules. The reaction is expected to be finished within the next 15 seconds."
From across the room came a panicked reply, "No correction to that estimate, prepare for impact!"
The Radiance Battleship fired off a devastating pillar of light, it took almost no time for it to hit the Kol Battleship. The Beam penetrated the ships shield with ease, as the beam tore through the hull of the ship, splitting it in two, and tearing through the antimatter storage chamber, causing a fatal explosion that could be felt on the the surface of the planet. The 3 unlucky siege frigates were so panic stricken that they tried to turn around to escape, but were only caught in the cross-heirs of several beam defense platforms that erased the 3 ships from existence. Only six of the long-range frigate were left, as they attempted an escape after having witnessed the destruction of a Kol with a single shot. 23 Cobalts followed them there after as well as the single Kol right behind them. On the Kol, more bad news echoed through the ship.
"Captain, another phase out detected. 30 light carriers are in the fleet. We now detect that there is an excess of 500 bombers that are moving towards our single ship."
"What about their main fleets? What are they doing?"
"They have just taken out the remaining Javelis LRMs. All we have left are 22 Cobalts, and this ship!"
The captain then decided that he was willing to sacrifice himself, as well as his ship to protect the escaping fleet that they needed badly on the Vasari front. He gave the order, "turn this ship around we are going to fight them head on!"
"Captain, we are out numbered, and outgunned. Besides, we took too much damage from the star base, and our shield generator is out."
"Yes, but we need to buy time for the rest of the fleet to escape, remember that they have an Inhibitor. We need to buy them as much time as possible, even if it means our own demise!"
The Kol swiftly turned and focus-fired on a single Disciple, which was easy to take out. But it seemed like the Advent didn't take to kindly to that as at that exact moment, all their ships fired on the single Kol. The bombers came within range as well, and a devastating light show ripped through the hull of the Kol, causing an explosive meltdown that blew the ship, and its crew to pieces. Once everything had cleared out, it was seen that the rest of the attacking fleet, escaped. The Advent didn't leave the battle unscathed. With a loss of 10 Disciple vessels and 2 Illuminators, there was hell to pay. A single voice from the planet was heard on all of the Advent ships, "This is Planetary Minister Adnan Vendira. You may all return to your respective locations. We will take care of the clean up. We could not have done it without you. I'll make sure to let the War Minister now what happened here. You may all rest well as you can expect commendations come tomorrow." With that the transmission ended, and the ships proceeded to return to their respective duties, as the clean up began.
Chapter 2: Interrogation
Coming 3/25/2009
Forgot to post that I also would like feedback about the story before I post chapter 2.
Interesting.... Chapter 2 please!
Samurye.
Great so far, keep it up....Bison...
I like it!
Fujuki
I like it to
Hey there! I liked it so far, keep it up mate
Cheers,
matius
ps: as for feedback, you do have some very minor spelling and punctuation mistakes, ie. ""The rest is information, that will be discussed at the informational meeting in the base with the War Minister. He has to hear this." -the first comma should not be there IMHO.
The story looks promising, I guess you have some interesting twist up your sleeve.
Very nice....
pretty good keep it coming
Ch. 2: Interrogation
=====Abilunon Transcencia Starbase (Sector 7-3 Div.)=====
"Is the detainee prepared for the questioning?" asked a notably tall men wearing the classic Advent military apparel.
"Yes," answered a slightly shorter man who then began to escort the War Minister to the interrogation room. "He's... rather it's been chained down, and sedated to prevent any attempts at rebellion. However, it is only partially sedated, as we know next to nothing on the on their physiology, and we don't want to poison it."
"Understood" was the War Minister's only reply. He entered the room to begin the interrogation of the Vasari prisoner of war. He approached the cell that the prisoner was being detained in. Unlike the steel cages the defilers used as their form of detention, the classic Advent cell used pure energy as the cell walls. No one would attempt to approach those things from the inside of the cell, for fear of undergoing a rather unpleasant amputation.
As he walked over, he ordered the 2 troops in the room to prepare for the escort, he was taking no chances with this monstrosity. Once he stood directly in front of the cell, a holographic control panel came out, and he input the system code to release the cell. The cell walls glowing in a light blue, hissing hue, dissipated, leaving nothing but the Vasari individual on the opposite side of the room. He issued the Vasari an order, "Follow Me." He then began to walk, and the prisoner followed, with one guard at each of his sides. They no sooner arrived at the interrogation room, they sat the captive down, and he was secured to the chair to prevent him from fighting back.
With all preparations aside, the interrogation began. "So you're the ones who are responsible for the essential breakdown of the traitors." said the War Minister. "We would be applauding you right now, but... your exodus fleet attacked one of our planets, leading us to believe that your intentions were for complete domination, and that is just something, that we can't tolerate. So I ask you, what the hell are you doing here?"
The captive answered in a very scratchy, unhuman-like voice, "You insolent fools! What makes you think that your inferior anatomy would compare to the superior strength that I have? Your technology itself lets us believe that you truly are an inferior race!"
"I do believe that you have us confused," was the War Minister's reply. "We are not the traitors you think we are. We are the Advent!" His deep, brown eyes on command gave off a miniscule flask, before turning completely white.
"You think you idiots can do anything to me? Give me one good reason to fear for my life, and maybe I may pity you!"
The War Minister, normally a humble person, wasn't going to pass up an opportunity to demonstrate his psionic abilities. He ordered the guards, "Release the Straps." Which they did, hesitantly for they knew the scene that was about to unfold. The War Minister was completely turned around by this point facing the opposite direction. He rapidly spun around, lifted his left hand, and made a pushing motion, slamming the captive into the wall in a powerful psionic choke. The War Minister again spoke, "Is that reason enough for you?"
The vasari responded, "This still isn't even close to enough to get me to tell you anything, you unnatural, inferior, insignificant, freaks!"
"Inferior are we?" said the War Minister while making a twisting motion with his hand tightening the telekinetic grip he had on the Vasari's throat. The prisoner was now gasping for breath. He felt the strength of twenty men crushing his throat, so he managed to get out a scratchy reply before he felt himself black out, " What is it that you want from me?"
Pleased with the response, the War Minister released his grip, and the captive stumbled on to the floor coughing, trying to get the air he needed. The Minister again ordered the guards to harness the captive. He then began with the series of questions that he had intended from the beginning, would get answered.
"Where do you... things come from?"
The Initiate now in perpetual fear for his life responded with the story of his people,
"10,000 years ago, we controlled a vast majority of the galactic core. We had several species under our complete control Many of them fell peacefully, and many more advanced than even ourselves, were forcefully subjugated and enslaved. Around 10,000 years ago, we had an experimental technology, that completely turned against us. It was a new nano-technology weapon that was designed to attack enemy planets and disable them so that we wouldn't even have to fire a single shot at any ships. The technology was nearly perfected. But at every single step of the way, the nanites used in the technology, no longer listened to our commands, and had to be put down by other means. One of those tests went completely wrong in a laboratory in orbit around the planet Kron. On the Viturska experimental transport lab, the means previously used to put down the nanites, were no longer working against them. The nanites were designed to replicate themselves to ensure a fast take over. The first things they attacked, were the communications arrays, which led our leaders to believe that traitors had taken over the planet, and thusly, lost a large part of the fleet to try to regain the planet. from the enormous armada of ships that we sent in, only 1 returned heavily damaged, and nearly irreparable with the crew drawn mad with fear. And in an act of self-preservation, we ran."
The Minister was satisfied with the answer, and decided to move on. "So you are in fact from this galaxy. so why is it that instead of seeking for shelter, like anyone forced from their homes and pushed to the brink, you decided that it was best to travel the galaxy for 10,000 years and oppress those who you ran into?
The captive was thinking long and hard about this question. No one in Vasari history had ever questioned the motives behind the empire. They simply followed orders, and carried out ruthless acts of autonomy and destruction. Now directly in front of him, was a being that without even having to touch him, could kill him with one move. The sam being was also questioning the most basic of Vasari beliefs, and he had no answer.
His thoughts were cut short as the War Minister caught his attention, "Look into my eyes," he said. This was the first time the captive took a good look into the Minister's eyes. He had just realized that his eyes were completely white, and opaque. The Vasari was captivated by those eyes. Never in his years of domination and oppression had he seen a being whose eyes captivated him as the Minister's. They suddenly flashed a glowing red color, and paralysis overcame the prisoner. before collapsing on the floor like a rag doll. He was now dead. The Minister's eyes then returned to their normal white color. Hw then began to walk out of the room issuing an order to the others in the room.
"Take him to the Nephthys Temples. Have them find any useful information over this species as possible. Any information helps. Have Rax examine it. He'll get more information out of it than the rest of the Advent's brightest minds combined."
"Sir," was a subtle yet short reply from across the room.
"Speak Informant," replied the Minister
"Crusader Neros has arrived and wishes to speak to you regarding his recent espionage visit to one of the defiler worlds."
Well don't keep him waiting. Send him to the docking bay where I will meet him. We must go to Thetis regarding a recent invasion attempt."
"Right away your excellency. And the body sir?"
"Put it on the next trade drone headed to Nephthys. Make sure you put it in the cryogenic chamber. Make sure that only Rax is to receive it and no one else. He will let us know more than anyone what we are up against."
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"Inbound strike craft, psionics activating Telekinetic Push!" Said a panic stricken voice that came from across the Halcyon Carrier's bridge.
"Strike Craft successfully repelled. Take apart their formation, and attack it from all sides. None shall survive!" Was the immediate response from a seat with a woman sitting in it. The vessel's commander.
"Final Analysis complete, we are showing 5 remaining light carriers, and the lone battleship."
A mental order was issued by the ship's commander to all the Drone adepts to target the last remaining battleship. As if on command, all of the strike craft turned around, and began to attack the remaining Kol battleship, while leaving the other cruisers and frigates to attack the remaining enemy carriers. Within the first pass of strike craft, the Kol's shields were no longer an issue.
Another telepathic message went out to the entire fleet, 'Battleship weakened, all ships and strike craft converge and destroy!'
Within a moment's notice, all of the warships in the fleet released a barrage of brilliant yet lethal beams that tore apart the ship's hull, causing a massive chain reaction within the ship. The final part of the chain however, is what ended the life of the Kol and all of those on board. When antimatter from the ship's ruptured antimatter chamber came in contact with the oxygen-rich air of the Kol, a catastrophic explosion happened literally disintegrating the ship in it's entirety.
No single ship escaped. The entire attacking fleet was pacified, and no damage was dealt to the planet, or any orbital structures. Aboard the Halcyon Carrier Valouria, Rax had just picked up on a mental message, 'Temple of Harmony, Dark side of planet, we need you here now.' He didn't hesitate one moment, and began making his way towards the nearest transport pad to the lab.
Rax was truly a prodigious acolyte. At the young age of six, he successfully underwent surgery for a neural implant to propagate his psionic abilities. At the age of eight, he had mastered the art of neurochemistry, and was one of the few people throughout the whole empire to successfully utilize Paladinium-16 a neurochemical so powerful, it had cost the lives of nearly 96% of those who attempted to use it. Only 3 others had been able to successfully use the chemical. The War Minister himself, the Imperial Minister, and his own mother. Paladinium-16 is a chemical that targets the frontal lobe of the brain's right hemisphere. It causes the lobe to expand, dramatically augmenting telepathic, and telekinetic abilities. At the age of 12, his telekinetic abilities far surpassed those of the most powerful Iconus Guardian captain in the entire empire. At the age of 14, he was extended an invitation to control a drone on the Valouria, which he gladly acccepted. Now at the age of 17, he is the only person in Advent history, to be able to pilot 2 bombers at once. He also performs much research at the Temples around his desert homeworld Nephthys when he isn't on the front lines.
He had been transported to the temple. All he had to do now was find out where or who exactly had called him. He released a thought into the Unity's collective mind, which was answered almost instantaneously. "Section 4 of the Biological laboratory." He was immediately confused. He was very rarely called into the biological chambers of anything, let alone the Temple of Harmony. Nonetheless, he made his way there. Upon arriving, he was met by 2 others. Both in garments clearly used when performing some sort of procedure on a living creature. They spoke to him, "We were informed earlier that this procedure could not happen without you, and you alone." He was dumbfounded. Why was he being called in to perform some procedure on someone he probably more than likely didn't know. The then both walked him to the table where the procedure was to be conducted, and he gasped, "What the hell is this thing? Some sort of huge earth lizard?"
One of the 2 geneticists, the woman answered, "It is supposed to be a member of the species that is attacking the defiler worlds at the same time we are. We were told that you specifically needed to perform the exploratory."
"Me? Perform a surgery on something that obviously isn't human? This is something that I an just not qualified for."
"Remember that the Unity has all the answers you need. We need you to do this, as no one knows more about reptilian anatomy than you."
"Well now that I am here, we need might as well get started."
He put on the spare garments left out for him for the procedure. When he was finished putting them on, he walked his way to the table, and began the procedure.
"Hand me a slicer," he said. The other geneticist, the male handed it to him. He took hold of it, and held it right on top of the specimen's skin. He then pressed a small blue button on it, and a light blue light came from it. He dragged the machine right above the skin until he made it to the neck. He them put the machine down, and split apart the 2 flaps of skin. Purple blood immediately gushed out of the corpse. He had made the first discovery from the body. "Helena" he called the female geneticist, "Write down that this... thing has an open circulatory system. The purple blood signifies a very high level of Iodine in the blood. Human blood is red due to the high Iron content. so this must mean that this thing is from either a volcanic environment, or a very cold environment, similar to that of the earth's southern pole 22,000 years ago. Now help me wash the blood out, we won't be able to do anything if it isn't clean." All three of them had a part in the cleansing. While Rax made the body levitate and rotated it 90 degrees, one of the geneticists channeled water from the cleanser chamber, into the body, while the other channeled the dirty water into the proper disposal area. They had finished, Rax placed the body on another examination table, and all three of them looked inside. They were astounded at what they saw.
"There is no way that this is really in here," said one of the geneticists.
"This has got to be something that we have never encountered anywhere ever before," said the other.
"But everything in this body should be dead," Said Rax. "And those... whatever they are, are still moving. This needs to be rectified. Notify the Ministry of War, and the Ministry of Scientific Understanding. We cannot let these enemies board any ship, or land on any of our planets. What are you waiting for? Go now!"
They both rushed out of the room, Rax now had to find out how it was to deal with what he saw. He immediately took a mental picture of what he was seeing, and released it into the collective mind, so that every single citizen, and computer in the empire would pick up on it. For the very creature that the War Minister killed, was not in fact a male. It was a female Vasari, and Not just any female, it was the queen of the Vasari!
Only the newest addition to the story! Ch. 3: Alert. Coming sooner than you think!
One complaint: in the autopsy section, you said that human blood is red because of it's high copper content. That is not true. Human blood is iron based. Creatures with copper based blood, such as crabs, actually have blue blood.
I read differently in another article, but thanks for the correction. Just goes to show that you can't trust everything on the web. Changing to match.
Just though that I give a sneek peak. Chapter 3 will have to do with the Vasari and Advent meeting face to face.
So i'm guessing it is safe to say that none are particularly interested in the story anymore?
On the contrary, Myself my job changed and don't read or play as much as before, but your story is quite good.
And correct me if I'm wrong but in your story there was no mention about copper content, only iron and iodine......Bison.....
I'm still interested, and simply waiting for the next chapter.
Still working on CH3. Kind of sucks that I have to go to school and work with no in between time. Curse you AT&T for making me work non-stop.
I'm still interested, so keep up the good work!
Yeah, what he said. The Army has me running up an down but I still check up on you once in a while! Looking forward to the next chapter...
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