Deep and Reaching Roots
As I start my post
I look for….
I reach out….
I give no opion
Of anything to say
I state my case
And everyone treats me like I’m gay
Maybe I should have had the cue
That Turning things around…
Takes deep and reaching roots
But from the first insult
I don’t know why,
Giving people the freedom to define
Only depresses me
I affirm my directions a million times a day
But not getting them to paper….
I affirm my Logic
I affirm my ways
But only a Percent make it to page
If you felt you understood a song
And wanted it to play
And hit the button
And the feeling went away
Hitting play was an affirmation to god
That you gave it your best today!
-Jeremy Sr.
I AM ADDING THIS : IF YOU WOULD LIKE FRIENDSHIP AND/OR POETRY CLICK MY NAME AND SEND ME A PRIVATE MESSAGE PLEASE TELL ME THE TYPE OF POEM YOU ARE LOOKING FOR (LOVE, INTELLIGENT, STORYS BOTH FANTASY AND LIFE'S) JUST GIVE ME SOME IDEA WHAT YOUR UP TOO.
Poetry is what I do professionally. -Jeremy Sr.
I'm not sure "Wincustomize" is the right place for it.
Uh... are you sure you get paid to write things like... this?
I have 400 of them and have written 600 which I distribute freely that's my hobbie of choice, logic not babble. -Jeremy Sr.
You need to find another job and get some therapy. This stuff make s no sense whatsoever. They put people in rubber rooms for stuff like this. And who's this "guru"...you?
Well... you seem to be harmless.
It's all about how I have god in everything I do, and try to live to my 'MAXIMUM POTENTIAL' BY MY THOUGHTS AND DEEDS. Some say you are judged on sin I say look around nobody lives life ever thinking they may be judged on their efforts of moving mountains, so to speak. Taking the burden off defensless kids who don't have the words to lead you along their beleifs, badgering them becuase they can't explain themselves. -Jeremy Sr.
Hey web gizmo, your not productive are you I am and I'm epic over you! good luck with your opinions you know what they say about them? That they are irrate and irrational reterec and you obviously don't know how to treat people in life so you can't understand anyone who you meet and hopefully this world will beat you down for your bad mojo! -Jeremy Sr.
WebGizmos:
Zazimire:
Webgizmos:
https://www.wincustomize.com/explore/all/pagesize/30/view/list/author/WebGizmos
http://users.wincustomize.com/Zazimire
Clearly you have no idea who you are talking to. WG is a long standing member and frequent contributer of very high quality work here at WinCustomize.
Put your money where your mouth is. This is a skinning site, show us what you've got.
P.S. Save the poetry for facebook.
Take it easy, chief. These forums aren't meant for poetry, so don't expect good feedback if you post them here. Trust me, post this stuff somewhere else, no one wants to see it here. If you want real feedback for your work, take it somewhere where a lot of people post similar material.
As I said before, this is just not the right place. Do yourself a favor, stop posting this stuff here.
This poem could be billed many ways but was posted as a thread to explain how it feels to be babbled at all the time. News is always reporting people who badger people to suicide and here that got a few people into prison for major time! -jeremy Sr. This tread is neccissary. I just didn't tend the others well!. -Jeremy Sr.
Also this forum is my first forum I have never posted before this forum, what is facebook? -Jeremy I have heard the name but never been there. -Jeremy Sr.
I understand you are passionate about your work and you are trying to prove a point, but I just think it would be in your best interest to post it at a site meant for poetry (as opposed to computer customization).
There are a lot of sites dedicated to poetry, try this one for instance:
http://www.thepoetsanctuary.net/
I'm sure the people there would better understand/respect your work and ideas. Posting here is kind of asking for badgering, unless that is your entire purpose.........which in that case is wasting our time. I am a very open-minded person, and that's why I am making this suggestion. Please understand that I am not trying to be disrespectful, just offering (useful) advice if you are serious about poetry.
Get a weblog.
Until they try to eat your dog and steal your jeans.
Thanks again. -Jeremy Sr.
Uh...Yeah...right. You keep telling yourself that "Jeremy Sr." And please do not pm me again...if you have something to say to me you can say it here in the forums. I have no desire to converse privately with someone that just rambles on. Your not productive....your epically delusional. But if you insist on writing this...whatever you call it...at least learn how to spell.
Really, your first? Your a FORUM VIRGIN? Awesome.... lucky us
Gotta give you credit... you sure know how to light these forums up.
Wishing a beat down on WebGizmos for his "bad mojo" doesn't sound very "guru"-like to me,
I had a little racehorse
I fed it just for fun
I put it in the Melbourne Cup
and strike me pink it won.....
Syd's a poet
And don't know it!
A greater truth hath never been spake.
the sad thing is I thought you just make up a topic and everyone would respect it and mostly just post kind chit chat ever post worked me up and all threads did was make a babble pit of opinions, I did post on d&d insider like twice and post on starcraft beta a couple of times but I don't understand other forums like this one. I now have a facebook page and (but) having trouble with signing in to my registered account over at the poet society, i even posted my poem as a news feed. -is note the way to post poems? -Jeremy Sr. And as long and eventful as today has been I am truely sorry you guys at stardock had to get into the mess that is opinion boards on political views. -Jeremy Sr.
that beat down was a personal message as not to fight on forums, BTW. -jeremy sr
if forums where for fighting <suck a ****> I win your irrate. Wow ! -Jeremy Sr.
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