Lore:
For years time flowed normally on the planet ticking away as it normally would nothing stopped it. Till one day the All Father decided to mess around with the laws of time and space it's self. At that same time a baby girl was being born her name was Vivi at the time and due to the All Father messing around with time and space it's self she would be changed forever. Soon the All Father realized what had happened and tried to change it, He could fix time and space back to normal but even his powers couldn't change the girl, time it's self seemed like it wouldn't allow it. Puzzled by this the All Father just ignored it and hoped that it was merely a fluke and nothing would happen anymore, He was wrong but he didn't care anymore to watch over the girl he had better things to do he thought. Vivi was normal for most her life but some how knew she was different and everyone else but never had any proof. When she was ten her and some other kids from the village went to play by the mountains even being told never to go there they were very unstable. They went anyway and while playing they heard a rumble from above and saw huge rocks coming flying down at them. Vivi closed her eyes and started to scream but after a while nothing no loud crash, no pain and no one else seemed to be crying in pain. She opened her eyes and saw everyone was fine but was staring up at the sky in shock and she slowly looked up to see the rocks floating in the sky as if they were stuck they're in time. Soon the children ran out from under the rock then they slowly returned back to time and fell to the ground.
People all thought the kids had made up the story time just doesn't stop it's self not even to save the life of a few children, but they were wrong. That night Vivi was sleeping in her bed till she was awaken by a voice calling her name. She followed the voice all the way back to the mountain where the rocks had fallen down. All she could hear for awhile was ticking till she looked around to see what looked like metal spiders appeared from behind the rocks and started talking to her. They told her they were the guardians of time, They watched over the flow of time and space and made sure it would all run smoothly they then told her of the All Fathers messing with time and space, her birth, How they stopped the All Father from eraseing her from the world and out of time. They went on to explain in more detail about time and space and they're roles in it. They made the webs of fate people sometimes refer to making sure it all stayed in line. She seemed to pick up on it all very easyily but didn't believe a word they said so they saw that they must prove to her the truth. They told her that she had power over time and space as well but being human it was to a more limited degree she laughed then noticed one of the spiders pick up a rock and throw it right for her head. She closed her eyes and a few seconds later opened them to see the rock frozen in time.
From that moment she was changed forever for years she helped people with her new found powers and saved many lives. Till one day the spiders returned when she was in here 20's and told her the All Father was gone and it was time to use her powers to take his place. At frst she didn't want it but then say it as her chance to change the whole world for the better. Changing her name to Chronos she stepped up for the battle over the All Fathers power and control.
Name: Chronos
Type: General
Alignment: Light
Appearance:
Minions:
(Yes I stole these images and no they don't have to look 100% like them it's just an idea.)
Strengths: Can slow enemy Demigods and hasten ally demigods.
Weaknesses: Low health, very fragile.
Abilities: (All numbers can be changed nothing is in stone. It just to give an idea of how they would work in-game.)
1) Time guardians.
2/4/6/8 minion Guardians. Ranged minions.
2) Time pause (stun) - using her powers over time she freezes an enemy demigod in time for a short period but they still take damage. 2 seconds/2.5 seconds/ 3 seconds
3) Fast foward - She accelerates time for herself or her allies increasing movement and attack speed. lasts 5 seconds increases 15%/ 8 seconds 20%/ 10 seconds 25%
4) internal clock (passive) - Gaining more mastery over time allowes her to increase her and her minions own speed through time. Increase attack speed and movement speed. 3% increase/ 6%/ 9%
5) Time Debris - Bending time and space she pulls out whatever random junk is floating around in the time stream and throws it at the enemy. (It will probably look like Rooks rock throw stun but without the stun) 300 damage /450/600/ 750
6) Temporal shift - Using all her time and space bending powers at once she focuses on returning herself or an ally back to base in an emergency. Very long cast time and lots of mana. 7 second cast/5 second cast /3 second cast.
7) Slow down! (Passive) - Everytime she attacks she slows the enemy down and minions also slow units down when they attack but to a lesser degree. Chronos slows for 4%/8%/12% Minions slow for 2%/4%/6%
8) Time distortion - Distorts the time around any building causing it to age at faster rate and causes the building to attack at a slower rate for it's duration.. 500 damage over 10 seconds -5% attack speed /800 over 10 seconds - 10% attack speed/1100 damage over 10 seconds -15% attack speed/ 1400 damage over 10 seconds -20% attack speed.
Idk it was just some idea that has been floating around in my head.
Chronos (Kronos/Khronos) is the Greek Titan of time, not Demigod...
lol i looked it up.
Chronos was imagined as an incorporeal god.
Not to be confused with Cronus, a Titan.
Haha, whateves...too close of a name and too too similar...
No offense, I give all people who create their own ideas for new Demigods hard times I find it funny people who do this haha (no offense once again)
-Phal
Lol no problem it's ok probably had it coming cause I'm busy writing this when i could be playing the game lol.
Good concept, but it could use some work. If the name was Chronos, I want a move called Trigger lol. When I saw the Time demigod thing, I immediatly imagined a move where they could age a building and it does a crap load of damage cause it rusts/crumbles. Some sort of decay move would be cool, but too bad it's a Light Demigod. I'm not exactly feelin the minions. Future lazer balls? Uhh maybe..flying hourglass knights! lol idk.
good concept but why a girl? I imagine chronos as a tough male (no sexual discrimination intended )
I thought we should have some female demigods to average out the males it's like 6 to 2.
You guys are right I will need to work on it and I agree about the future orbs and lasers and all that, I guess I got stuck in trying to throw something in from doctor who lol.
AoE seige ability seems really OP, especialyl at low levels.
well im pretty sure chronos is a guy lol. the spelling variations r coz its either latin or greek spelling. if u can send me a link to the one u saw, id like to see it myself out of curiosity.
im doing a project with him in it atm and i dont remember coming across 2 diff types of Chronos'.
but i like the overall idea though.
7 seconds is a long time. wat if it was something like this... This could be a counter to The new demon demigod's skill shadow swap.
Temporal shift 0.5 sec cast timeRange - max bat swarm.Teleport ally to ur location. Ally is healed for 400/600/800 health and gains 15%/20%/25% movement speed for 5 secs.
Admit it, you just want a sexy chinese girl in the game
i like gkrits idea, but i got a better one (i think its better...) its an instant cast time and can be targeted on you or ur ally. U are instantly teleported back to base, and fully healed, but it has a fuckin ugly recharge time. Its supposed to be a save right? Saves are always at the very last minute. And walkerz, who the fuck doesnt want a hot ass chinese girl in game? Im sure i do damnit!
yeh i think the cast tim ein the idea i presented needs to be shorter lol, prob 0.5 secs.
I'd like to comment on the story and give some tips to everyone that wants to write a story for the demigod that he/she made up.
First of all your grammar, spelling and punctuation should be good. You make far too much mistakes and you leave out some full stops that really should be there. You write: "People all thought the kids had made up the story time just doesn't stop it's self not even to save the life of a few children, but they were wrong."
Make that something like: The people of the town thought the children had made up the story. They argued: "time just doesn't stop itself. Not even to save the life of children." But they were wrong.
Also, you use words that are too popular and informal for a story. Things such as "messing around with time." I would have written something like, "The Allfather made some adaptations in the rules of time and space" or something like that.
And you should also try not to repeat the same words too many times. (ofcourse you can use words like 'the' or 'it' more often for it to look ugly than something like 'The Allfather') This is a mistake you don't make that much but it is fairly common so I say it anyway.
Then about the substance of the story. First of all the story doesn't tell us anything about Vivi/Chronos other than that she can do some tricks with time. There is almost no emotion or motivation in the story. (wanting to change the world for the better is far too vague and far too cliché) take for exampel the story of torch bearer. There are some emotions and motivations there that tell us someting about this caracter. Love, loss, hate and vengence are some of the themes that you see and when you control him in the game you here him say things that match his story. But there is almost nothing like that in this story.
Secondly, this person looks too much like Sedna in many ways. (mentally and fysically) The same kind of 'good girl who helps you and who you can trust.'
As I see it, the story really isn't good enough to be used, not even as a concept. I hope you dont take offense over this, that isnt my intention but I would pay some more attention to a good story for this demigod.
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