Remnants
<A ship was recently discovered in the Terminus system, seemingly intact, but abandoned. A team was sent inside to investigate, and they located the ship’s bridge. Power was restored to bridge section. The following is a transcript of events in the ship’s log, later identified as Korigul, a Kortul Devastator class Vasari battleship>
<Note: exploratory parties reporting hearing strange noises in walls of ship; accounted to nervousness, but now mounting sound and video recording devices on exploratory party members’ helmets>
<Log entry begun approximately 30 standard minutes prior to first contact with Aluxi dynasty ships; terminated three standard minutes following cessation of conflict>
<Translated post recovery; note: appropriate rank equivalents utilized, known background on individuals attached in separate file>
An alien bridge is displayed on screen, a polished dark floor extending in a semi-circle and is covered by swirling symbols. The walls are lined with monitors and consoles, the screens glowing yellow on deep purple. In the center of the room is a dark colored chair, sitting in which is a dark skinned individual in a red uniform, covered in pins and patches. Directly in front of him, there are no consoles, only blank bulkhead. There is a small display on the left arm of the chair extending up at an angle for easy viewing.
“Captain Kastru, move carrier fleet into the shadow of the asteroids and launch all squadrons.” said a commanding voice.
“Affirmative,” came the reply with some comms distortion.
“Commander Ratingus, bring your Enforcer and Skirmisher detachment to bear on the native forces. Frontal assault formation,” the commanding voice continued.
“Yes, Admiral Katrikkan,” said another voice over the comms.
“Captain Celchu, bring the Assailant group to seventy degrees off of their port bow. Engineering, Conn. Bring the Korigul up fifteen degrees and bring the engines to all ahead full. Take her above the battle.” Admiral Katrikkan commanded.
“Aye, Aye sir.”
“As ordered Admiral.”
Admiral Katrikkan opened his mouth to issue another order when suddenly the ship shuddered and alarms blared.
“Damage report! What hit us?” he snapped.
“Sir, sensors reported multiple high velocity metallic slugs impacted on our shields. Computer reports the slugs’ most likely origin from the native fleet, at the indicated ships.” The battle appeared on the bulkhead in front of Admiral Katrikkan with several capital ships outlined in bright yellow.
“Conn, Damage Control. Shields held through the initial strike, but barely. Another hit like that before they recharge, and we’ll likely be crippled, if not destroyed.” A series of numbers scrolled across the display on the arm of the chair.
“Weapons, Conn. Weapons are free. In-ship Systems, Conn. Distribute power away from engines to weapons and shield regenerators. Draw emergency power from anti-matter reserves. Get those shields back up to full ASAP.” Admiral Katrikkan said with urgency.
“Designate highlighted ships as group [untranslatable][assumed letter in Vasari alphabet; designated “1”] and send data to fleet. Targeting Control, Conn. Focus fire and destroy targets [1]. Commander Ratingus, focus fire on targets [1]. Targeting data sent.”
“Received,” answered Ratingus.
“Sutra, divert power to phase missile launchers and reloaders and fire upon targets [1].”
“Understood,” answered the captain of the Sutra as the Vulkoras Desolator began moving into range.
Three Kol class battleships began turning towards the command capitol ship that sat raining fire from above the fight. A Dunov Battlecruiser opened fire upon the Desolator, but the Sutra’s shields stopped the Dunov’s rounds. The phase missiles launched by the Sutra moved through the Aluxi ships, and impacted the shields of the battlecruiser, and explosions were seen beneath the shielding of the ship. A large explosion filled the screen as the missiles that were bypassing the shields struck the command bridge, severing control of the ship and allowing the engines to overheat and catastrophically fail.
“Sir, sensors detect a strong magnetic field increasing in strength around the natives’ ships. They are firing!” the sensors officer exclaimed.
Admiral Katrikkan quickly ordered, “All power to the lower and forward shields! Do not let that volley through!”
The shields readout for the upper and rear sides of the ship reduced to zero, as the lower shields readout increased. Then the lower shields readout dipped considerably, dropping to zero for a moment with an imperceptible pause before the ship shuddered.
“Status!”
“Three high mass slugs fired at extreme velocity. The first two were entirely blocked by our shields, but the third was only partially blocked. Loss of pressure in outer compartments in section [untranslatable][assumed letter/number combination designated “2”], and outer hull buckling, but that’s all,” reported an officer.
“We were lucky. Be more vigilant. Return power to normal distributions, and accelerate to flank speed. Bring the bow down thirty degrees smartly. Let’s take her to the fight,” Admiral Katrikkan said.
“Attention all ships, do not fire upon target [untranslatable][assumed letter/number; designated “3”]. I want that ship alive. Instead focus fire upon each ship from closest to farthest relative to the Sutra’s position. Ravustra, move to support Sutra’s flank,” he continued as the battle progressed on the bulkhead display. The Aluxi fleet was now beginning to stumble as more of its ships were destroyed or crippled. Only a single Kol Battleship remained unscathed, as no Vasari ships had yet fired upon it. The Vasari were not without some casualties, as the Skirmisher detachment was now five less in number, and the Enforcer detachment was short one ship. The Assailant group had not suffered a single casualty, and the three Vasari capital ships that were in the task force had not even lost shields yet, except for when the three Kol battleships had fired their rail guns at the Korigul.
The Aluxi ships began to retreat, making for the edge of the planet’s gravity well. Bomber wings appeared in front of them, boxing the ships in, but they kept moving. Fighter wings began to strafe the fleet, closely followed by the bomber wings. Soon chaos reigned as ships began to falter and die, their inertia carrying their dead hulks forward at the same speed until either an aft explosion accelerated them into the ship ahead, or a bow explosion slowed their progress and faster ships behind the now uncontrolled husks of ships crashed into them.
Admiral Katrikkan ordered, “Engineering, Conn. Raise the bow thirty degrees, continue flank speed. Subverter ships, Korigul actual. Accelerate and disable weapons and engines of target [3].” On screen, a group of small blips broke from the Korigul and raced ahead, halting a Kol Battleship. The rest of the Aluxi fleet continued onward, to the edge of the gravity well, missing two Kol Battleships, four Kodiak heavy cruisers, fifteen carriers, and sixteen cobalt light frigates. In total three fourths of the original fleet had been destroyed, crippled, or otherwise rendered useless. Only five light frigates, one Kol battleship, one Dunov Battlecruiser, two Kodiak heavy cruisers, and one carrier survived to jump away.
Admiral Katrikkan sat back in his chair, pleased with the success of his operation, but apparently unsettled to learn that the natives were more advanced than any other race the Vasari had encountered, beside themselves. Even though they still were millennia behind the Vasari, it was a new prospect for him to lose ships in an operation that was supposed to an easy domination of a planet. “It appears that this race is more advanced than we thought. They are probably multi-planet, if not multi-system. Prepare defenses for a counter attack,” Admiral Katrikkan commanded, “set up repair platforms and phase jump inhibitors. I want fifteen missile batteries in an overlapping pattern on this side of the planet. They are likely to come from the same direction when they attack as when they fled.”
<Log entry terminated>
<Transmission terminated. Will continue as each entry is fully translated>
well, Word '03 works again. First a dictionary
Vasari
Ships
Korigul – Kortul Devastator, flagship of Third Remnant Fleet
Sinistra – Kortul Devastator, flagship of Katana Fleet
Leviathan –Kortul Devastator, flagship of the Ravisher fleet
Reaper – Kortul Devastator, flagship of the Rakni Fleet
Tiraskus – Kortul Devastator, flagship of the Fourteenth Remnant Fleet
Sutra – Vulkoras Desolator, Third Remnant Fleet
Karakus – repair vessel; small and flat in order to hover above any surface of a ship to repair the outer hull, Third Remnant Fleet
Fleets
Ravisher Fleet- large fleet of the Dark Armada
Rakni fleet – oldest and largest remaining fleet in the Dark Armada: its commander outranks Admiral Katrikkan
Third Remnant Fleet – a fleet formed from fleeing remnants of the unknown enemy that took the homeworlds and ships built by the secret factory ships that are kept well behind Vasari lines
Fourteenth Remnant Fleet – a relatively new fleet formed from fleeing remnants of the unknown enemy that took the homeworlds
Katana fleet – a large fleet, one of the original Dark Armada fleets that fled
Characters
Admiral Katrikkan - commanding officer of Third Remnant Fleet (kah-trik-in)
X O Tarkin – executive officer of the Korigul (tar-kin)
Admiral Veris – commanding officer of Katana Fleet (ver-iss) (iss rhymes with hiss)
Rear Admiral Soth – Ravisher Fleet CO (sawth)
Rear Admiral Krath – Fourteenth Remnant Fleet (as it looks – rhymes with wrath)
Fleet Admiral Saren – Rakni Fleet (sair-en; sair rhymes with air)
Commodore Vanth – commander of the Subverter group
Captain Kastru – commander of carrier group of Third Remnant Fleet (ka-stroo)
Captain Grett – captain of Karakus (gret – rhymes with set)
Captain Celchu – commander of Assailant group of Third Remnant Fleet (sel-choo)
Commander Ratingus – commander of Skarovas Enforcer group, Ravastra Skirmisher group
Grand Admiral – commander-in-chief of the Vasari armed forces; unnamed
Viceroy Vorak – chief planetside political officer, currently part of The Supreme Council of the Vasari; supervises forward elements of fleets and expansion, currently well behind lines of battle
Terms/language
Trikka – Weakling, usually good at negotiating because cannot fight (trik-ka)
Batyn – Rodent once on Vasari homeworld, analogous to a rat (bah-tin)
Giruus – gown-like article of clothing worn by the non-combat Vasari (gih-roos) (the “r” is rolled)
Sthil – the metal that the pins that signify high rank are made of; is often synonymous to “The Brass” – the people with the administration/command
Geramine – Vasari equivalent of adrenaline
“The tunnel” – space personnel slang for a docking extension tube
Holomap – a holographic representation of the known or relevant galaxy; more accurate than the 2 dimensional maps used by the TEC
Katarn crystal – used to protect the Vasari ships’ systems from their Kostura warheads
Corusca – Kol battleship, captured in First Contact by Vasari (core-uh-suh)
Tripoli – A Martin Dreadnought, captured by Vasari in battle (trip-oh-lee)
Normandy – A Kol Battleship, flagship of Fifth Fleet; late-war
Valiant – a Kodiak Heavy Cruiser escorting the Swift Foot
Swift Foot – A research vessel sent to investigate the abandoned Korigul; late-war
Warden Flak Frigate – early Flak frigate
Wekkan class Carrier-battlecruiser – early carrier capitol ship
Martin Dreadnought – Predecessor to the Marza Dreadnought
Jattan LRM frigate – early long-range frigate
Aegis siege frigate – early siege frigate
Admiral of the Navy Kol – The highest serving ship-borne officer in the TEC fleet
Sergeant Nichols – trooper assigned to the boarding party complement of the Normandy
Bohateur – squad member under Sergeant Nichols
Cole – squad member under Sergeant Nichols
Doyle – squad member under Sergeant Nichols
Terms
Transparisteel – a transparent steel-like substance used in windows and screens on military vessels; it is much stronger than glass and is not prone to shattering
Tacboard – tactical display that sits in front of the fleet commander’s station; is projected onto the transparisteel display
Locations
Aliope – the first planet to fall to the Vasari.
Naeve – a strong military outpost of the TEC
Admiral Katrikkan arrived at the Combat Bridge, where he opened a comms channel to Admiral Veris. Veris was the one who spoke first.
“Katrikkan, I’ve got Fleet Admiral Saren in the brig. The Reaper sustained massive exterior hull damage and lost pressure on two hundred fifty-three decks. The shield generator was disabled, and the antimatter tanks’ seals were broken.”
Katrikkan shook his head, amazed that they’d lost pressure nearly three quarters of their decks. The shield generator would have to be fixed if they wanted to even think about using the ship in battle, and the hull damage seemed extensive enough that it would need a complete stay in a shipyard to repair the damage, if it wouldn’t be less expensive just to scrap the ship and build a new one.
“How about the engines?” Katrikkan asked.
“They suffered considerable damage, as well as the support structure. Maximum output is eight percent of normal. They aren’t going anywhere fast. Phase drives are better, but not much. Maximum output: fifteen percent.”
“That ship would have been quite helpful in an engagement. Send it back for repairs; I don’t want to lose it if it can be saved.”
“It’ll take a while to turn it around. Maneuvering thrusters aren’t in very good condition. Half of them are nonfunctional.”
“The news gets better by the minute,” Katrikkan said sarcastically. “How is the planet bombardment proceeding?”
“The planet has nearly been wiped of all command and control structures and will soon be taken. Ground forces are proceeding at an extremely quick pace. The natives aren’t putting up much of a fight.”
“That is good. Anything else change that I should know of?”
“Nothing of importance. No comms messages or orders from command, and no phase activity detected in the vicinity.”
“Thank you. Korigul actual out.”
“Sinistra actual out.”
It was common practice to speak directly to the commander of an operation when one of equal rank wanted to know the progress of the op. This had arisen as a way for the commanding officers to acquaint themselves with one another when working together in a task force. It kept the commanders friendly toward each other, and helped fleet cohesion.
During battle, this was kept to audio only, in order to free up computing space for performing the countless calculations involved in maintaining a shield under fire and plotting missile and weapon trajectories. This is difficult enough in a near flat world of the ancient sea-going vessels, where threats appeared in essentially two dimensions. In space, however, there was no median, such as water, that limited their movement, so attacks could come from anywhere, and could be going anywhere. This affected sensors and shields the most, as weapons usually were fired straight ahead, or close to.
Katrikkan sat back in his chair, considering whether he should immediately push forward, or if he should hold and let his ships get some rest and build some orbital facilities around the planet they had just taken.
There were many artifacts left in the galaxy from previous civilizations. Should he search the planet for one of these, or save the resources? If nothing was found, the higher-ups wouldn’t be pleased that he had spent the resources for nothing, but if he did find something, then they would be extremely pleased. Hell, if he could find one of the ancient jump drives, then they would surely promote him.
There were only two ranks higher than his in the military – Fleet Admiral, and Grand Admiral. There was already a Grand Admiral, but there could always be more Fleet Admirals. And he would have access to many more reinforcements and modifications to capitol ships to carry out his objective. His fleet would be among the first to receive upgrades and retrofitting if they were available.
Admiral Katrikkan carefully weighed his options, and finally decided that he would leave build orders for defenses and income structures, would detail two scouts to Low Orbit Observation to assist in exploring, and would continue with the portion of his fleet that was not heavily damaged. He hoped to at least find some natural feature that would assist in developing the planet.
He radioed the colonization teams with his orders, and then gave his orders to his fleet. The task force moved to the edge of the gravity well, where they waited for the other ships to catch up. Katrikkan had sent a scout ahead already, and was waiting for its scheduled report back. He didn’t have to wait long.
The raw report appeared on his chair display. It listed total ship counts, defensive structures that had been built in advance, and included a map of the gravity well. They had arrayed a defensive barrier along the close edge of the well. It would be easy to flank, but the garrisoned fleet was sitting behind the structures. They would provide strong fire support and could be dangerous if they remained under the cover of the structures. Their fleet was combat-heavy, and had few support ships.
Provided that they could neutralize the structural defenses, it didn’t appear that the fleet would pose much threat.
Katrikkan thought for a moment.
After half a minute, he had a plan. He outlined it on the holomap that was projected from a projector mounted flush in the floor. He sent the data to his subordinate commanders. He would have to use something not normally allowed in battle, but he believed its use justified. He brought up the comms menu, selected the nearest suitable Vasari controlled world, and issued the order. He then ordered the task force’s phase drives to be activated, and waited in his chair for the small shudder that meant they had entered phase space. He heard the phase drive start up, and began a count in his head, timing when it activated.
“One… two…three…four… now,” he recited mentally. The drive activated a moment later than he predicted, sending them toward the fight.
He had several hours in phase before the fleet reentered real space, and so he brought up a map of his task force’s progress into the natives’ territory. Aliope was set as the “homeworld” from which he was starting his campaign, and had two places where phase space was stabile enough to conduct local traffic. One ended in the magnetic storm that linked to the previous world, as yet unnamed except for a generic classification, and the other ended in an empty asteroid belt.
He touched the world he was heading toward, and the holomap zoomed in on it. There, it displayed the gravity well, shown as a translucent sphere, and the planet as the major features. Small icons representing the last known positions of ships and structures were located on the map. He paused a moment, then pressed a button on the side of his chair arm, and touched the place where his ships would exit phase space. A swarm of icons appeared there, and, after tapping another button that reduced the amount of icons into different, larger groups, he moved each one to its planned location. He intended to keep all of his ships out of range of the structures, and so each group was set to pass wide around their predicted firing arc. They moved together, leaving behind a trail of thin blue lines. As his “fleet” turned around the structures, he had them stop and had the Kanrak Assailant group begin firing on the fleet.
This is where he stopped the map, being unable to predict the natives’ plans and whether they would move out of cover or not.
After he turned off the holomap, the admiral left the combat bridge and headed toward the elevator. This brought him up to the transit bridge, which was in fact above the combat bridge, as it was set near the top of the ship and was farther forward than the combat bridge.
He walked in on the bridge crew who were busy plotting their route and checking the different readouts. They little more than glanced up at him, and then continued their work. Outside the windows, he could see the light oscillating blue that surrounded the ship while it was in phase space.
“At an hour out, move to the combat bridge,” Katrikkan ordered.
His order was met with a mixed chorus of “yes, sir” and “aye, aye”. He nodded, and then asked, “How’s our energy levels?”
“Green, sir. Our reactors are functioning at 98% efficiency,” responded the engineering officer. 98% was a high number, but still within normal ranges. He had a good engineering crew, and expected no less.
* * *
The ship shuddered as it exited phase space, and the sensor screen came online. The Aluxi ships were still in the formation the scout had reported them in, and the scout ship appeared on his screen as well, as a translucent point off to the side of the gravity well, indicating that they had engaged phasic cloaking.
Katrikkan’s task force stormed into the gravity well, following the plan Katrikkan had outlined in phase space earlier.
As the Assailants opened fire, the native ships began to move within their cover of orbital turrets. They halted at the far edge of the structure ring, and launched small fighters and bombers. Their movement brought them out of the firing ranges of the Assailants, and their strikecraft were too small to be targeted by the Vasari’s main guns. The Jansurak Sentinels, however, moved among the fleet so they were dispersed, providing cover to all the ships. The capitol ships, as well as the small contingent of Lasurak Transporters, launched their strikecraft – all of which were squadrons of fighters.
They moved to intercept the haphazard formations of trader strikecraft, and tore them to pieces in the initial sweep. The Sentinels easily took down several fighters each pass, and together they quickly eliminated the small ships.
Aboard the Korigul, a small blip appeared on the sensors display, traveling at extreme speed toward the planet surface. It impacted, and the Trader ships all ceased firing.
“Sir, sensors aren’t picking up any native transmissions,” The sensors officer noted.
“Very good. All ships close on the native formation and erase it from existence. Priority target is the battleship on the far side of their formation,” Katrikkan ordered.
Several replies came at once, but only Admiral Veris and Rear Admiral Soth’s replies were clear enough to make out.
The fleet charged inward, racing past the inert point defense structures straight to the natives disabled within. The whole of the task force opened fire at once, devastating the defenseless natives. Within the first minute, three fourths of the native fleet was wiped from existence. Within the minute after, the Vasari task force had annihilated the native fleet and had begun systematically destroying or disabling the point defense ring.
As the last of the point defense structures went offline, Katrikkan contacted the planetary bombardment detachment of his force.
“That was rather… easy,” the leader of the detachment prompted. It was technically a breach of protocol for the receiving party to speak first.
“Yes, that’s the idea. Keeps our casualties down. Now, I want you to begin bombardment of the planetary fortifications. After clearing the fortifications, send down ground teams to secure the planet and begin building defenses and a phase stabilizer node. Once the planet is secured, the node must be up and running as soon as possible. Is that clear?” Katrikkan asked with the barest trace of annoyance.
“Yes, admiral,” The Desolator captain replied.
Closing the link, Katrikkan leaned forward, resting his head in his hands. He had already received the total damage count, and was not looking forward to the inevitable call from high command.
The warhead he used was hard on the Vasari ships’ systems, damaging the crystal layer that covers said systems to protect them from just such a weapon. Some of the systems had blown because their shielding had failed from age, and would need repair.
The crystal they use for the shielding had become rare as their flight from the darkness brings them farther and farther from their home system. Occasionally, they stumble across a source for the crystal, but the Dark Armada must always eventually abandon it as the flight continues.
Currently, supplies of the crystal were running dangerously low, and the Dark Armada was searching everywhere for a source. This reminded Katrikkan to contact Aliope to check the results of the mapping, as he was constantly searching for sources of that crystal and suspected that some of the asteroids contained crystal of some form.
Acting on the thought, he opened a communication channel to Aliope. He was greeted by the excited faces of two Vasari workers who were hastily bringing up something on a holodisplay, as it was several hours earlier than their scheduled report.
“What’s the mapping uncovered?” Katrikkan queried.
“My lord, we have uncovered something of the highest value – a large deposit of crystalline asteroids orbiting the planet!” one of them began, his scientist’s white giruus swaying from the motion. His finger dipped into the holo-keyboard momentarily and the image of several crystalline asteroids came up in the display
“What form of crystal?”
“Katarn. The form that protects our ships from our Kostura warheads.”
“Very good. They’ll give you a promotion for this,” Katrikkan replied.
“They’ll give us all promotions for this!” the second scientist added excitedly.
“Thank you for informing me. That will be all,” Katrikkan said with finality.
“Of course, my lord!”
Katrikkan closed the link with the scientists and brought up the comms network. Updated continuously, it was an easy and fast way to set up a link. It showed all of the Vasari expansion into the Aluxi space, as well as several planets farther into the Vasari territory. In the bottom corners were two symbols. He tapped the one in the lower left, which brought up the image of the Grand Admiral, this time in a mostly red giruus with black trim, instead of his military uniform.
“My lord, I have news of the greatest importance,” Katrikkan said, kneeling momentarily.
The Grand Admiral clasped his hands on his desk, and waited expectantly.
Standing, Katrikkan continued, “My scientists have discovered a large deposit of crystal in a local system. It is Katarn crystal. In all probability, the nearby systems will have even larger deposits.”
“This is good news. Full efforts will be made to support your campaign and to recover as much of the crystal as possible. We are sending another task force to assist and protect your flank. You will be receiving reinforcements almost continuously, in order to form more task forces to help expand the territory we are acquiring.
“The task forces will not be under your command, I’m afraid. You have been doing an excellent job so far, but the distances…” The Grand Admiral said, unsure how to easily explain.
“I know, logistical reasons. I should be fine with what I have.”
“Good. Fleet Admiral Saren is on his way back to the home fleet to await trial for cowardice and abandonment of duties. His case isn’t looking very good. Just thought you should know. One a side note, however, you may want to arrange an event for your force – they have been shipside for too long.”
“Thank you, I canot believe I forgot to do so.”
“Just try to remember in the future,” the Grand Admiral replied, nodding to indicate his dismissal.
Katrikkan swiftly kneeled, fist over his heart as the link closed.
The screen blanked, and then displayed a field of stars – the outer view – and he stood again. Katrikkan paused a moment, wondering whether to backtrack to Aliope, then decided against it. He walked back to his chair and summoned his exec with the press of a button and an uttered word.
A little over a minute later, Tarkin appeared on the combat bridge. A worried look flitted across his face momentarily, and then passed as he regained full military discipline.
“Tarkin, how long have the crews been at sea?” Katrikkan asked.
“Nearly a year, sir,” the exec answered.
“And so there are certain… stresses that have built up, yes?”
“Yes, sir.”
“Let’s have a port built around this planet, so that we have a space to relieve those stresses. The crew will want to get off of the ship, change their environment, rather than use the ship’s R and R room.”
“Aye, sir. I’ll have groundside begin the construction. Two would be a better number, to help hold all the crew, true? They’d be packed rather tight if we only had one.”
“Good idea. Have two built, but in close proximity to each other so the crewmembers can travel back and forth easier.”
“Aye, sir.”
“Dismissed.”
Tarkin saluted, and then walked off of the bridge with an almost too crisp military step. Katrikkan walked back to his chair, where he began filling out the necessary forms.
where'd all my peeps go?????
I'm sure they'll come running back soon. Based on the calibur of this story, they've definitely not gotten bored, but maybe just busy, like you recently were. I haven't quite gotten the chance to read it all yet (I've got a music performance tomorrow and homework), but I can't wait until the weekend to read it! congrats on the great story!
im here!
like the new chapter, although to be honest, not as much as previous ones. maybe its just been too long since i read the last part that iv forgotten most of the story. that could be it. but keep on writing! great stuff.
EDIT: yeah, looking back on ur previous posts, it was all about the TEC for a while, and then suddenly its back to vasari. it had me confused for a while.
that's why I put the location and time at the beginning of each major change. here's a hint: if it says "Korigul" and is within a year of First Contact, then it's likely Vasari. if it's 10 years into the the war, it's probably TEC. I don't think Advent will be a large part of the story
good to have you back orodum, your writing skills have been missed
Orodum!!!!!!! Your back! I will now burn something in your honor
Nice to know you're back to writing again...
I have been sick for most of the week, but yeah, I liked this chapter. Keep it up!
Fujuki
I just caught up with everything! AAAAAAHHHHH! can't wait for the next chapter! Keep it up!
I find it interesting how you've used some SW charachters as ppl in this story
Celchu: Wedge Antilles best buddy
Tarkin: "The butcher of Alderaan"
Welcome back.Thanks for continueing the awsome story.Looking forward to reading more of it.
This has got to be the best readin I've ever...read!
You should totaly write a book!
something about aliens running from the dark, halo-like humanoids defending their galaxy...
AND AWSOME space battles full of explosions, lasers, missles and all sorta stuff!
(why do the vasari always take prisoners in this story?.....)
I can go into the tactical ramifications of taking prisoners, if you want. esp. for this part of the war
Bring out the next chapter or I will get my hatchet and will hunt you down
Nice. I think story conflicts a bit with the universe background but you write well enough that it's enjoyable anyway.
Approximately five weeks post First Contact
Admiral Katrikkan was leaning back in a softly padded seat, sipping at an orange drink. His mind had a pleasant buzz to it, the drug within the drink starting to take effect. He was armed, of course, even if only with a sidearm. But he also had three fully armed and armored bodyguards to protect him, as well as a platoon of infantrymen waiting on proverbial “Condition-two” outside the building, ready to jump in if things started getting heated, for example, if a brawl broke out.
The Vasari military, even though in a strict society, still had its dissidents. They never damaged a ship, of course, as all the vessels were needed to continue to flee the darkness that had been chasing them, but they had no qualms about attacking orbital facilities and the high-ranking officials, both military and political. It was mainly for this reason that the Admiral had so many protectors, each with a family behind the lines under threat, should they fail to protect the Admiral.
Admiral Veris had the same guard, as did the three Rear Admirals who were in the task force, when they were “ashore”. It was for this reason that fights rarely took place anywhere near the sthil, anywhere even on the same deck.
Katrikkan, emptying his cup, stood and strode out of the cantina, headed toward a theater. Hologram technology was still limited to military use; in order to avoid people using it to gain access to areas that they were supposed to be in, so the show he watched was in a comparatively pitiful two dimensions.
It was one he’d already seen, but he didn’t care. It wasn’t him making the decisions, him with the weight of the responsibility for five fleets on his back. This was where he could forget the worries of the outside world, and could focus on the story being played out in front of him. The ports were a shipman’s dream – theaters, cantinas, hot food, and a soft bed. There were other sources of entertainment, of course, but the cantinas and theaters were the life of a port.
The Vasari warships also went through resupply, refitting, and an occasional retrofit at other facilities while most of the crew was enjoying themselves, to save time that was necessary for the continuing flight.
The movie was nearing halfway through when one of Katrikkan’s bodyguards tapped him on the shoulder twice, and said, “My lord, the Grand Admiral is trying to contact you.”
Katrikkan quietly replied, “Thank you,”
Already at the end of the row of seats, he silently stood and walked out of the theater, two bodyguards ahead of him, one behind.
They led him out to where they wouldn’t disrupt the patrons at the theater, and he strode to a nearby terminal and punched his login into the keyboard.
Immediately, the image of the Grand Admiral appeared on the display. This time there was only a blank steel bulkhead, giving absolutely no hint as to where he may be.
“Admiral, how is your fleet faring?” he immediately asked.
“Quite well, the ports have been fully constructed and the crews are quite enjoying them. I plan on remaining here for three more days, then continuing. We’ll leave the ports in orbit for future fleets.”
“Very good. To be honest, I was actually contacting you to check on the ports. That, and to ask you to be at the northernmost airlock to receive a high-ranking visitor in half a ratask.”
“Yes, My Lord, I will be there shortly to prepare.” Katrikkan knew that if the Grand Admiral wanted him to know the identity of this mysterious visitor, then he would have already told the admiral.
“End transmission.”
Katrikkan swiftly knelt as the transmission cut. The Grand Admiral had been using a voice pickup. Those were only installed on small craft such as strikecraft and shuttles, because the pilots often had their hands too busy to work the transmission controls.
Katrikkan dismissed the thought. He exited the transmission interface and brought up transportation, calling for a vehicle.
Within a suntr, it had arrived and was waiting for them to enter a destination. The computer had noted his login, and the vehicle – an oval shape, momentarily reminding Katrikkan of the Evacuator class ship – had thicker than standard armor.
Katrikkan climbed into the vehicle – a vrask – and was followed by his bodyguards. A holomap of the structure appeared in front of him, and he quickly selected the appropriate airlock.
He arrived within twenty minutes. The door opened for them, and the bodyguards climbed out, scanning the surroundings. Katrikkan stepped out of the vrask without haste, and waited for the armed, though mainly honorary, semtet that he had called en route to arrive.
Several scouts had been sent out before the Ports had been finished, and he studied those reports while he waited.
After he had finished skimming the second report, he was interrupted by the soft hum of four enlarged vrasks. They glided down to the edge of the debarking area, where they slowed, came to a hover, and then everyone inside quickly exited them. Three seconds after stopping the vrasks took off on full power.
Katrikkan smiled. Someone had decided that the semtet would practice a combat drop.
The four squads jogged toward the Admiral, saluted with their fist over their heart, then said as one, “My Lord, what is your command?”
Katrikkan nearly burst out laughing, though he maintained an outward military calm. It had been a long time since he had been accorded such respect from others of his own race.
“At ease. I’m a bit lax on formalities that don’t directly affect combat efficiency,” he said. “We will be welcoming an important visitor. I want one squad in each of the upper levels of those buildings,” Katrikkan continued as he pointed toward two buildings that commanded a good view of the “threat zone”, as it was called during the Vasari equivalent of basic training. “A third will form an honor guard on each side of the airlock, and the fourth is to cover the two entrances here. Is that clear?”
“Yes, My Lord,” the Janrukan, the equivalent of a Major in the Trade Order forces and with five arcs on his shoulder, one above the other, said, “You heard him! A squad, you’re in that building. B squad, you’re in the opposite one. D squad, you’re covering the entrances. C squad is with me. Move out!”
Three of the six-man squads jogged away, heading in different directions. The fourth remained with the Janrukan. C squad moved to either side of the airlock and checked their weapons. Several minutes later, a dull thud reverberated through the floor, followed by a short hiss of air. The airlock door opened, and out stepped an imposing figure.
Katrikkan stood erect, stunned at the identity of the newcomer.
"Hello, Admiral."
"ratask.” vrask" "semtet" "suntr"
Could you please explain a little more as to what these terms mean? They fit in, but a counterpart explanation or further description would be nice, like you did with the term Janrukan.
Another good chapter
sorry, a ratask is the Vasari equivalent of an hour. it is eighty-one minutes long
a suntr is equivalent to a minute. eighty are in a ratask.
a semtet is a military grouping, such as a battalion, but a semtet is composed of four six-man squads and a single leader
a vrask i figured would be kind of obvious.
I reckon it's going to be an Advent dignitary.
^^^I'm gonna say the Grand Admiral
Less Dictionary, more story.
Please
Keep your phasic pants on. Jeez.
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